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    3/6/2006

    心雨轩

    一壶香茗添几杯
    举杯同饮叹华年
    心雨小憩流连客
    觅得知音伴红颜
    9:21 AM | Blog it

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    Picture of Anonymous
    kikix2125 wrote:
    一壶烫酒倾几碗，
    自举单饮苦无伴。
    心雨沥沥几分寒，
    觅得知音随我叹。
    June 12
    alan zhanwrote:
    你四句诗没有一个主要的韵脚。杯，年，客，颜。除了年和颜稍微算得上韵，另外两个相差太大了。而且，nian 年和颜 yan 的发音不是很相近。年是顶在下颚发音，颜是平舌音。所以，要改动的大了。
    May 25
    Apollowrote:
    有点词穷了。
    你有什么高招？
    你也可以理解是我会陪伴我的红颜
    Mar. 7
    alan zhanwrote:
    老兄，这最后一句不太对啊，找到知音之后给红颜做伴？当然，红颜可以指年轻的岁数，不过红颜一般说的是女孩子啊，你又不是女的，除非，你有当基佬的倾向？不然辛辛苦苦找个知音培别人，累不累啊？
    Mar. 6

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